The graph shows the electricity production in France from 1990 and 2000

The graph shows the electricity production in France from 1990 and 2000
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The given line graph provides information on: the electricity production in one country in France between 1990 and 2000 . It is obvious that there are some significant changes in the given figures .
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in nuclear
while
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, there was a downward trend in renewables .
According to
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the chart, there was a period of stability in renewables until 2005 .
Then
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, they steady increase reaching 40 in the
last
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year 2010 . In hydroelectric , there started at around 60 in 1980. After that , there was a fluctuation until 2005 at 50
while
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, they did not change in both 2005 and 2010 .
On the other hand
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, the thermal started with a rise number 130 in 1980 . Afterwards, there was a drop in the rest of the years in thermal .
By contrast
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, there was a dramatic surge in nuclear reaching 460 at a peak .
Similarly
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, there was a gradual fall in 2010 .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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