The graph shows the electricity production in France from 1990 and 2000
The given line graph provides information on: the electricity production in one country in France between 1990 and 2000 . It is obvious that there are some significant changes in the given figures .
Overall
, there was an upward trend in nuclear Linking Words
while
, there was a downward trend in renewables .
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According to
the chart, there was a period of stability in renewables until 2005 . Linking Words
Then
, they steady increase reaching 40 in the Linking Words
last
year 2010 . In hydroelectric , there started at around 60 in 1980. After that , there was a fluctuation until 2005 at 50 Linking Words
while
, they did not change in both 2005 and 2010 . Linking Words
On the other hand
, the thermal started with a rise number 130 in 1980 . Afterwards, there was a drop in the rest of the years in thermal . Linking Words
By contrast
, there was a dramatic surge in nuclear reaching 460 at a peak . Linking Words
Similarly
, there was a gradual fall in 2010 .Linking Words
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