The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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of creating

cement

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, and later the

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of concrete. One noticeable feature is that

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cement

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production

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is mostly a step-by-step

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,

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concrete

production

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is mainly a one-step

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containing

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a mixture

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of different elements. The picture on the left describes the

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of making

cement

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by

initiating

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mixing limestone with clay

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and putting

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through a crusher. The produced powder is

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run through a mixer first and

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through a rotating heater. After receiving heat, the output is put on a grinder, which eventually produces the

cement

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. The

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is

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bagged and shipped off to a construction location to make concrete. The

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of concrete, as explained in the picture on the right, requires

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the mixing

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of different

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elements

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with different ratios.

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, 15%

cement

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is mixed with 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel and

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all put in a giant mixer. The mixer

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rotates clockwise for

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, after which the concrete is produced.