You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter: •explain your interest in the course •describe your problems •find out if a refund is possible
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Dear Mr. R,
I hope you are in radiant health. My name is Lisa, a student in your 9th batch summer tennis
course
. I am writing this
email with a dishearten
feeling that unfortunately Change the verb form
disheartening
due to
an emergency
I am not able to finish the Add a comma
emergency,
course
.
Moreover
, I know it’s a three-month premium course
and leaving it in a month is quite disappointing. However
, I am always fond of tennis that’s why I came to England to gain the proper training and instruction. With a long face, I have to go back to Canada, where my parents need me most. Additionally
, I am the
only child, and my father is undergoing Correct article usage
an
a
major surgery. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, he wanted to see me before going to operation
Add an article
the operation
theater
.
Change the spelling
theatre
On the other hand
, my mother’s condition is getting bad, as she is handling all the medial
formalities by herself. Correct your spelling
medical
Consequently
, it’s a
high time to stay with them and already booked the return ticket.
Correct article usage
apply
Further
to this
, I paid the course
fee in advance during registration. It would be highly appreciated if you can
refund half of my payment. I am looking forward to hearing from you and anticipating a positive response.
Yours sincerely,
LisaWrong verb form
could
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a clear and distinct main idea. Avoid combining multiple different points within the same paragraph.
logical structure
Improve the logical flow of your letter by using more transitional phrases between different sections and points.
suitable writing tone
The letter follows a polite and suitable writing tone, which is appropriate for a formal letter.
greeting and closing
Good use of greeting and closing phrases, such as 'I hope you are in radiant health' and 'Yours sincerely,' which adds a personal touch to your letter.
Contractions
Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.
In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.
In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.
Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.