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The first chart below shows the number of British visitors to the US and American visitors to the UK from 2011 to 2015. The second chart shows the spent by those visitors in that period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the number of British visitors to the US and American visitors to the UK from 2011 to 2015. The second chart shows the spent by those visitors in that period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagrams show the numbers of UK
visitors
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 from America and US
visitors
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 from Britain in the years 2011 until 2015
as well as
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 the amount of money that they spent. As the data shows, Compared to the number of American tourists in the UK, the US was visited by more British.
Therefore
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, the total of funds expended by Brits is
also
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 greater. There is a slight downward trend in the number of US
visitors
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, which
initially
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 in 2011 was around 3.2
million
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 to below 3
million
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.
However
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, the sum of money used experienced an increase in those years from nearly 4 billion USD in 2011 to just above 4 billion in 2013. Afterwards, the number of tourists and the amount of dollars spent continued to rise up until 2015 Regarding the quantity of UK
visitors
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, there was a quite noticeable drop in 2013 from almost 3
million
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 to exactly 2.5
million
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. But after that, it progressively surged to above 3
million
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 people in 2015.
Additionally
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, American travellers squandered the most funds in 2015 with a figure of 4
million
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 USD
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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