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The bar charts below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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world education rates by different places and by sex in the previous year.
Overall
 it can be seen that in south
asia
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 people are not concerned
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 their literacy,
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 states produced more educated humans. Looking at the data sets in more detail it describes that in
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south
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asia
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 55%
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female
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 and 34%
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male
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 were illiterate, which was the highest in
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Besides
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 it was 52% and 29%, respectively.
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sub-saharan
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africa
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 the amount was decreased, which was 31% boys and 58% girls.
In addition
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oceania
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 the number was
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 than
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 one, which was 20% women and 9% men. Turning to the remaining statistics it provided that the ratio in
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 countries was almost similar. It was 10% and 11%.
On the other hand
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 their education. So, they served
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. In these
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 it was 1% and 2%, which was the lowest in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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