The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the differences between the present town called Birchshire and the planned improvements.
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, it is clear from the map that significant changes will occur, including the addition of more houses, a car park, a supermarket, and a sports centre. Linking Words
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, there will be more residential areas and roads.
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Firstly
, in the top right of the plan, we can see they will remove Griffiths Farm and use Linking Words
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place for a supermarket. Linking Words
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on the right side but at the bottom, there is a big difference. the area will change entirely. The only thing that remains is the public park, which will expand to include a sports centre and a car park.
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Secondly
, on the left side, we can easily see small differences. They do not plan to change the area entirely, but there will be some new houses built. They Linking Words
also
plan to remove the Farmer’s Market to make space for a roundabout.Linking Words
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