The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of tourists visiting four different types of attractions and the right-hand graph presents the fraction of visitor activities in entertainment parks in the United Kingdom in 1999.
Overall
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it is clear that
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people are interested in going to theme parks and museums.
Moreover
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, the beach is intriguing to the amusement park's visitors.
To begin
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with, individuals, who went to England in the year 1999, chose theme parks and galleries as their primary destinations which had almost the same percentage, at approximately 38%. Historic houses and Monuments occupied 16%.
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, wildlife zoos came in
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place and registered 9%.
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, the leisure park's visitors opted for Blackpool Pleasure Beach which was just under half of the amusement park, which was about 47%. Both Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Southport accounted for roughly 17% together.
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, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor represented exactly 10%.
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