The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
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The provided picture gives information about how a village changed from 1995 until now. Looking from an
overall
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perspective it is apparently seen that the most considerable changes happened right top
corner
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and left bottom
corner
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of the
map
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. In 1995, to the left bottom
corner
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of the
map
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, there was a road which was surrounded by several shops and a fishing industry that included a fishing port and a quite big fish market. Turning to the right top
corner
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of the
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, there were some green areas,
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as farmland and forest park. At the current times,
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the shop and the fish industry have been transformed into restaurants and apartments respectively, green fields have been changed into territories for sports facilities.
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, in the middle of the
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, new accommodation buildings have been constructed, new street runs from another road to the left side as well.
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, a new car parking area has been built near the hotel.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corner, map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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