Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you thibk, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

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fascinate

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on

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instant

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believe

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that

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impact on human society and will write an essay to express his statement. First of all. It can not be undeniable that human attraction and

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patient ability will be fallen down

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of the usual of providing anything in a short time.

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, the

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of concentration and

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is the reason why

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fast-baged

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fast-based

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enough skill set and can not be put up with high pressure

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long

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time.

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to say that the gap between

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will

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themselves

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continue living

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hurry, especially

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fall down of communication, the lack of

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in harmony with each other and the break of

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sympathy with someone else.

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,

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but

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the gap between people and people will

be risen

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and make every single one of us

be

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more

apethetical

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apathetic