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The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1954 and 2014

The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1954 and 2014
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The two maps give information about the changes in an American
town
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 between 1954 and 2014.
Overall
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, the
town
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 saw significant growth
although
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 some trees and
houses
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 did not develop as much as its
buildings
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 and airport. Moving to a detailed analysis, in 1954, there were many trees along the road. There were a plenty of residential
houses
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 in the centre of the area and in the southeast of the
town
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. In the northern direction of the city, was located some factories. A local supermarket is built on the right side of the canal, and on the left side of the church. There was a large petrol station which was located in the north of the
town
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. In 2014, a lot of commercial
buildings
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 were built here and some central
houses
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 were replaced by these
buildings
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. Petrol station, some southeast residential
houses
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, and trees along the road remained unchanged. The church was demolished to make way for a sports stadium. Supermarket was built near the commercial
buildings
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. In the north of the city, factories were dismantled and a new large airport complex was built.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, houses, buildings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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