The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of people born in and out of Australia living in
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types of settlements as urban, rural and town from 1995 to 2010.
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, there was a fall in all placements over the period except for cities. It is immediately observed that they were the dominant percentage in Australia and outside,
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towns reported the lowest one of births of individuals in any year. When cities and towns had a gradual increase or decrease between 1995 and 2010, rural areas had a plummet during
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period. Starting with the leading localities, cities exceeded the others in these years and showed a considerable rise from 50% to 65% of folks born in
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country and from 60% to 80% of people born outside it. The second largest percentage of individuals were born in and outside the country living in rural areas.
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they had a strong decline by 2010 from 40% to 15%. Rural areas remained in third place of the number of the birth of humans. As for towns, they showed a downward trend from 20% to 15% of people born in
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country and no change in the birth percentage of humans outside it.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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