The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant. The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.
the given
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The
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bar chart illustrates the frequency
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at that
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that
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which
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usa
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US
people came to eat junk
food
in outlets through the period from 2003 to 2013.
overall
, the number of those eating fast
food
once or twice per month and several times per year witnessed an increase,
whereas
other categories all declined.
Additionally
, the "once a week" and "once or twice a month" groups always had
high
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a high
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proportion during 10 years. Beginning with individuals using fast
food
a few times a week and those eating weekly, these figures stood at 31% and 17% in 2007 before seeing a moderate rise
by
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of
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2% and 3% in 2006,
respectivelt
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respectively
.
By contrast
, those eating at junk
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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once or twice a month accounted for 30% in 2006,
however
,
this
number dropped to 25% in 2006 and
then
experienced an increase in 2013
where
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when
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it got over the initial data and
reaches
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reached
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a peak of around 33%. turning to the remaining groups with which figures were stable. for the " a few times a year " group, it commenced with nearly 14% in the first year before going down to exactly 15% and levelling off over a span of 7 years. Regarding
to
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the number of people in
"daily"
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the "daily"
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and "never" categories, in none of 3 years
were
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was
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more than 5%,
otherwise
, they both saw a reduction to 3% and 5% in that order prior to being steady by 2013
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