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Writing Samples
Band 5

You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

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Dear Momo,
l
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 hope
this
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 letter
find
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finds
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 you well
an
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and
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 in great condition health.
l
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 am writing
this
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 letter regarding my
movement
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move
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 to
countryside
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the countryside
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.
However
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,
l
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 still
fell
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feel
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 like
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 am not ready to leave you and
these neighborhood
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this neighborhood
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. Since the day
l
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 came to these
apartment
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apartments
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l
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 clearly remembered that you are the first friend that
l
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 have. You
help
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helped
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 me to pick
my
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up my
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 stuff and
accompany
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accompanied
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 me to the office building because
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 just lost my way.
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 felt like
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have
Wrong verb form
had
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 found
a
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apply
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fresh air when you just
help
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helped
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 me and
support
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supported
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 me in
bad
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a bad
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 mood.
l
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 do will miss every single part
on
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of
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 our park and all around our condominium
that
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apply
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being a place to play and study after class. The memory would be the best
in
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of
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 our childhood because
of
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apply
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you still be
my
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by my
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 side. My new town is good for study and recreation.
l
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 always to visit
new
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the new
a new
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 place just in case you will ask me about my
recomendation
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recommendation
 destination if you would
to
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apply
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visit here. ln next summer is the best time to
picnis
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picnic
picnics
,
l
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waiting
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waiting for
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 you to visit me and we will have a great day
beside
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besides
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 the lake.
l
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 am looking forward
hearing
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to hearing
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 from you soon Kind regards,
luyu
Correct your spelling
lulu

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grammatical error
Check for grammatical errors and typos to improve clarity (e.g., 'finds you', 'neighborhood', 'do will miss' should be 'will miss', etc.).
detailed explanation
Try to provide more specific examples of the help provided by the neighbor for a richer, more compelling response.
content improvement
It would be helpful to mention more specific features of your new home and how it compares to your current residence to strengthen your task achievement score.
writing tone
The letter maintains a friendly and sincere tone, which is suitable for the context.
logical structure
The logical structure is easy to follow, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
paragraph organization
Good use of paragraphs to separate different ideas and maintain a coherent flow.
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