You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.
Dear Momo,
l
hope this
letter find
you well Change the verb form
finds
an
in great condition health. Correct your spelling
and
l
am writing this
letter regarding my movement
to Replace the word
move
countryside
. Add an article
the countryside
However
, l
still fell
like Correct your spelling
feel
l
am not ready to leave you and these neighborhood
.
Since the day Change the determiner
this neighborhood
l
came to these apartment
Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
l
clearly remembered that you are the first friend that l
have. You help
me to pick Wrong verb form
helped
my
stuff and Change preposition
up my
accompany
me to the office building because Wrong verb form
accompanied
l
just lost my way. l
felt like l
have
found Wrong verb form
had
a
fresh air when you just Correct article usage
apply
help
me and Wrong verb form
helped
support
me in Wrong verb form
supported
bad
mood.
Correct article usage
a bad
l
do will miss every single part on
our park and all around our condominium Change preposition
of
that
being a place to play and study after class. The memory would be the best Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
our childhood because Change preposition
of
of
you still be Change preposition
apply
my
side.
My new town is good for study and recreation. Change preposition
by my
l
always to visit new
place just in case you will ask me about my Add an article
the new
a new
recomendation
destination if you would Correct your spelling
recommendation
to
visit here. ln next summer is the best time to Change the verb form
apply
picnis
, Correct your spelling
picnic
picnics
l
waiting
you to visit me and we will have a great day Add the preposition
waiting for
beside
the lake.
Replace the word
besides
l
am looking forward hearing
from you soon
Kind regards,
Change preposition
to hearing
luyu
Correct your spelling
lulu
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grammatical error
Check for grammatical errors and typos to improve clarity (e.g., 'finds you', 'neighborhood', 'do will miss' should be 'will miss', etc.).
detailed explanation
Try to provide more specific examples of the help provided by the neighbor for a richer, more compelling response.
content improvement
It would be helpful to mention more specific features of your new home and how it compares to your current residence to strengthen your task achievement score.
writing tone
The letter maintains a friendly and sincere tone, which is suitable for the context.
logical structure
The logical structure is easy to follow, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
paragraph organization
Good use of paragraphs to separate different ideas and maintain a coherent flow.