The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the survey on the space from children’s accommodation to school that
focus
on children from 11 to 16 years old in the UK in a year.
Change the verb form
focuses
Overall
, the majority of people chose to walk or cycle to school for journeys that were 1-2 miles
while
bus
was the most common option for students who Add an article
the bus
traveled
over 5 Change the spelling
travelled
miles
.
Regarding commutes under 1 mile, walking accounted for 90%, followed by bicycle with 50 percent, car for
8 percent and bus with 3%, which is considered to be the least. Change preposition
with
On the other hand
, with journeys that were over 5 miles
, bus is the most common option for students with 67%, that is
triple the percentage of cars.
Referencing journeys within 2 to 5 miles
, there are 48% students cycling, followed by the figure of cars with 31% and 25% walking.
In addition
, to communities within 1-2 miles
, cycling remains the best choice with around 77%. 60% of the student’s choice is walking whereas
cars and buses were not chosen for this
distance with only 8% and 3% respectively.Submitted by long379.md on
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