It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Good
family can play Correct article usage
A good
a
important role in the Change the article
an
humans
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human
friends
. Famiy
always Correct your spelling
Family
take
the friendship place. Change the verb form
takes
This
essay will analyse both point
of view and express my agreement or else.
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points
Indivisul
can not live alone it is Correct your spelling
Individuals
Individual
the
nature since ever, so Correct article usage
apply
that
the family play a big role in Correct word choice
apply
humans
lives. Mainly, the children who rise in a good family who care about Fix the agreement mistake
human
him
will have a good output of that. Correct pronoun usage
them
As a result
, the kids will have healthy relations with others like friends
, teacher
, etc. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
In addition
, the community around this
familly
will see Correct your spelling
family
this
result of good family on the child. Totaly
, I agree with the concept of Correct your spelling
Totally
good
family.
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a good
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human will not be with family whole Correct word choice
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his
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apply
live
. As like, Replace the word
life
human
must study in school, go to work, etc, that Fix the agreement mistake
humans
make
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makes
him
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them
to
have Change the verb form
apply
an
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friends
a friend
friends
. Besides
, conections
with others Correct your spelling
connections
is
a major scale in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
community
. As the family Correct article usage
the community
support
the friends
also
support
there
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their
friends
. Moreover
, there is
a many types of Verb problem
apply
supporting
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support
by
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from
friends
, it can be physical support
or psychological support
. So, in my Correct your spelling
opinion
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to say Correct your spelling
decided
the
both good family and Correct your spelling
that
friends
are blaying
a great role in Correct your spelling
playing
indivisuls
lives.
In conclusion, good family and Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
frindships
are so important for people. From my own personal point of Correct your spelling
friendships
friendship
view
a lot of people need more information about the Add a comma
view,
tow
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two
concept
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concepts
"good
family" and "friendship".Change preposition
of "good
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