The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
The chart presents the findings of a study of visitors to wildlife
Parks
& Zoos, Historics & Monuments, Museums & Galleries, and Theme
Parks
in England in 1999.
Overall
, the highest proportion of individuals had visited the Theme
Parks
, followed by the Museums & Galleries, then
the Historic Houses & Monuments, and the Wildlife Parks
& Zoos.
In 1999, Theme
Parks
was the most attractive place in the UK, reaching 38% of tourists. The number of visitors to the Museums & Galleries doubled the Historics & Monuments to 37%, by 1% less than the rate of the Theme
Parks
. The Theme
Parks
were divided into five different areas. Inside, the most stunning place attracted a significant number of tourists hitting roughly 50% of the overall
area, then
the Alton Towers and Pleasureland, southport
shared approximately the same rate 17% and 16%, and the Change the capitalization
Southport
last
two welcomed exactly 10% of people.Submitted by ibamba88 on
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