The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
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The chart presents the findings of a study of visitors to wildlife
Parks
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& Zoos, Historics & Monuments, Museums & Galleries, and
Theme
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Parks
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in England in 1999.
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, the highest proportion of individuals had visited the
Theme
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Parks
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, followed by the Museums & Galleries,
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the Historic Houses & Monuments, and the Wildlife
Parks
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& Zoos. In 1999,
Theme
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Parks
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was the most attractive place in the UK, reaching 38% of tourists. The number of visitors to the Museums & Galleries doubled the Historics & Monuments to 37%, by 1% less than the rate of the
Theme
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Parks
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. The
Theme
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Parks
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were divided into five different areas. Inside, the most stunning place attracted a significant number of tourists hitting roughly 50% of the
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area,
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the Alton Towers and Pleasureland,
southport
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Southport
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shared approximately the same rate 17% and 16%, and the
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two welcomed exactly 10% of people.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words parks, theme with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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