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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph depicts the rates of fuel
production
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 in the UK over the period from 1981 to 2000. The graph outlines the
production
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 proportions of petroleum, coal, and natural
gas
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, measured in energy
units
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(where 1 energy unit equals 1 million tonnes of oil) In general,
production
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 of natural
gas
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 increased throughout the 19-year period,
whereas
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 coal manufacturing showed a totally different trend. To start with, Petroleum consistently maintained the highest
production
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 levels throughout the entire period, surpassing coal and natural
gas
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. Its trend illustrated graduate growth from 100 to 140
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, but the number dropped after being stable in 1987.
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, petroleum started to be produced in
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higher
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reaching a peak of 140
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 in 2000. Coal
production
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 was stable but witnessed a significant decline from 80 to 40 energy
units
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 before gradually increasing and stabilizing by 1986.
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, the quantity kept slightly going down to approximately 30
units
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 in 2000.
On the other hand
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, natural
gas
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 started with a lower level of
production
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 but has been steadily increasing since 1991, showing a more rapid growth rate compared to coal.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, gas, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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