The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming habits in last 4 weeks in five different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) in Australia.
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coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities over four weeks.
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trend is different for five cities.
Melbourne and Hobard are the same, with 63%. Followed by Sydney which was at 61% and Brisbane represents 56%. Adelaide people are just under 50%.
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live in Hobard and Brisbane 55%. Sydney comes in last
place. Sydney, with 44%, and Melbourne, with 43%.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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