The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the six different types of devices (mobile phones, laptops, tablets, desktop computers, flat-screen
TVs
, and conventional TVs
) that Canadians used to watch television on
in two different years (2009 and 2019).
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Overall
, in 2009, most Canadians used conventional TVs
to watch news, while
in 2019, it was flat-screen TVs
. In contrast
, in 2009, tablets were the least used electronic device, whereas
in the next 10 years, it was conventional TVs
.
Mobile phones and tablets showed significant growth from 2009 to 2019, with the first growing from 15% to 26% and later increasing from 8% to 12%, respectively. In 2019, the popularity of flat-screen TVs
increased significantly, rising from 8% to 27%.
In the case of laptops, the percentage decreased from 20% to 12%. Similarly
, desktop computers fell by 6%, from 18% to 12% in 2019. Conventional TV’s performance dropped dramatically in this
chart, from 34% to 4%.Submitted by s_syedy on
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