Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
Animal testing nowadays is considered to be very inhumane by some individual groups.
However
, in others' beliefs, experimenting on animals
led to important scientific discoveries. In my opinion
in some Add a comma
opinion,
cases
animal experimentation could be justified because of their contribution to the innovations in the field of science. Add a comma
cases,
However
, it is not the sole contributor to the development of science, as in
vitro method has been proven to be a good alternative in some situations.
First of all, there are many discoveries that Correct article usage
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had
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have
animals
. In other
words
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words,
animals
are injected by certain types of medicine to observe effects on an animal's well being
. Infected Add a hyphen
well-being
animals
are given different variations of the same medicine to test which variant works the best and has the least side effects. Otherwise
, they can also
be tested just to see the living organisms' reaction to certain medicines. For example
, vaccination for the disease called chickenpox has been discovered by using laboratory mice.
On the other hand
, there are some alternatives to animal testing, such
as in vitro methods. It entails that testing is carried out in a test tube instead
of a live organism. Companies that do not have animal testing can be taken as an example,
because they generally use either in vitro Remove the comma
apply
method
or plants.
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methods
To sum up
all the aforementioned points, two different groups of people hold opposing opinions regarding animal experimentation. Although
animal testing is indeed cruel, some cases can justify it because of its contribution to the
historical discoveries. Correct article usage
apply
However
, it can be changed for other methods of experimentation that do not require living organisms to test out the hypothesis.Submitted by lola.kz.kg on
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task achievement
The essay presents a generally clear and comprehensive response to the prompt.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are effectively present, providing a solid framework for the discussion.
task achievement
Relevant examples, like the vaccination developed from laboratory mice, are used to support claims.