The bar chart shows the proportion of
of
males and females Remove the redundancy
apply
have
been successful in passing their driver's test between 1980 and 2010 in one Asian Country.Correct pronoun usage
who have
The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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