The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The bar chart shows the proportion of

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apply

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males and females

have

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who have

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been successful in passing their driver's test between 1980 and 2010 in one Asian Country.

atulbhujbal

May 16, 2024

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Linking words: Add some linking words.

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Linking words: Add linking words.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

27 words

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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

We are living in a throw-away society and things are used in a shorter period I of time and thrown away. What are the causes of this phenomenon and what problems might it cause?

Human activities has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people think that government should spend money on faster public transportation, while others think there are other more important priorities such as healthcare and the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.