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The chart provides information about the US top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago

The chart provides information about the US top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago
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The chart provides information about the US top ten processed food export markets for
last
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 year and six
years
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 ago. We can see from the data that Canada food export is about 9.3
billion
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 US
dollars
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 6
years
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 ago and the next to is Mexica about 4
billion
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 and The European Union about 2.6
billion
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dollars
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.
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, we can see that Hong Kong and Australia is the same about 300 million
dollars
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 US little bit more in Phillipines is about 0.5
billion
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, South Korea is about 0.9
billion
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 and China is about 2.4
billion
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dollars
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. Japan is significantly more spend than China and other countries is about 2.4
billion
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.
However
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,
last
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 year shows that Canada spend 4
billion
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 more than six
years
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 ago. The European Union and Mexico spend for US food export about 2
billion
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 more than six
years
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 ago.
By contrast
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, we can see

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast, last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 10 times.
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