The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
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The line graph provides information on changes among
air
pollutants
like
transport
, industry, total
air
pollutants
, and
households
in the UK, over the course of 15 years.
Overall
, between 1990 and 2005, total
air
pollutants
significantly fell, but remained dominating other soursces. Meanwhile,
whereas
,
households
and
transport
stayed at roughly the same level,
air
pollution
due to
industry was not far behind the total
air
pollutants
.
To begin
with, in 1990, at just about 7
million
tonnes
, total
air
pollutants
greatly declined to 4 by 1999. Following which it kept a steady pace during the next 3 years, and in 2005 it took a downward trend reaching approximately 3
million
tonnes
. Started at just under 6
million
tonnes
, industry fell by a steep of 3 in 1997,
then
gradually declined to 2 milliones by 2005.
On the other hand
,
households
and
transport
kept nearly at the same pace, starting at about 1
million
of
tonnes
.
However
, by 2005
air
pollution by
households
reduced to nearly zero,
while
transport
stayed at the same level.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, transport, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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