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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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The line graph provides information on changes among
air
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pollutants
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 like
transport
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, industry, total
air
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pollutants
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, and
households
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 in the UK, over the course of 15 years.
Overall
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, between 1990 and 2005, total
air
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pollutants
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 significantly fell, but remained dominating other soursces. Meanwhile,
whereas
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,
households
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 and
transport
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 stayed at roughly the same level,
air
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 pollution
due to
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 industry was not far behind the total
air
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pollutants
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.
To begin
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 with, in 1990, at just about 7
million
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tonnes
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, total
air
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pollutants
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 greatly declined to 4 by 1999. Following which it kept a steady pace during the next 3 years, and in 2005 it took a downward trend reaching approximately 3
million
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tonnes
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. Started at just under 6
million
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tonnes
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, industry fell by a steep of 3 in 1997,
then
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 gradually declined to 2 milliones by 2005.
On the other hand
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,
households
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 and
transport
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 kept nearly at the same pace, starting at about 1
million
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 of
tonnes
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.
However
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, by 2005
air
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 pollution by
households
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 reduced to nearly zero,
while
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transport
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 stayed at the same level.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, transport, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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