The diagram below shows the process for producing bottled and canned carbonate drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the way in which bottled or carbonated drinks.
Overall
, there are five stages in the whole carbonated water producing
process, beginning with the Add a hyphen
water-producing
water
cleaning and the end delivery to markets.
At
the beginning, the raw Change the preposition
In
water
cleans
by passing through chemicals. Wrong verb form
is cleaned
Then
it is transferred for heating to help to pump it with electric heating. Then
, the heating water
is sent to the cooling pipe and carbonated dioxide water
. Where carbon dioxide is introduced to create the carbonate affected. After the join carbon dioxide as well as
it will be sent mixing stage. That stage starts with mixing coloring
and Change the spelling
colouring
also
syrup, the most important thing, which is flavor
. Change the spelling
flavour
Next,
they are filtered and then
split into two during bottling. Again, prior to bottling and canning. It is fizzy drinks look
like Correct pronoun usage
that look
Coca-cola
The finished drinks are Correct your spelling
Coca-Cola
then
boxed up and sent to supermarkets for retail.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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