The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies
This
picture illustrate
the ingredients of frozen fish piesChange the verb form
illustrates
,
and the various steps in Remove the comma
apply
its
production.
Correct pronoun usage
their
Overall
, there four
main products to manufacture fish pies, specifically Add a missing verb
are four
salmon
, potatoes
, peas, and sauce. In addition
, while
potatoes
can be used for up to a month, salmon
should be used within 12 hours or less.
In terms of potatoes
, these potatoes
are cleaned in water after they are delivered to the producers. Then
it is peeled one by one and cut into small pieces. After that, these small pieces of potatoes
are boiled and chilled for storage. Then
, salmon
and other ingredients, fresh salmon
is delivered to manufacturers. Then
, they are mixed with lemon juice and salt. Next,
the mixtures are grilled in steam ovens. After that, skins
and bones of Correct article usage
the skins
salmon
are removed. After being inspected, peas and sauce are added to Correct article usage
the salmon
salmon
, and the Correct article usage
the salmon
last
ones are added being
stored Change preposition
to being
potatoes
. In the next step, the mixtures of peas, sauce, salmon
, and potatoes
are wrapped,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
freezes
.
Wrong verb form
frozen
Finally
, they are stored or dispatched to stores or sellers.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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