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picture

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the ingredients of frozen fish pies

,

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apply

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and the various steps in

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their

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production.

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, there

four

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main products to manufacture fish pies, specifically

salmon

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,

potatoes

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, peas, and sauce.

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,

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potatoes

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can be used for up to a month,

salmon

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should be used within 12 hours or less. In terms of

potatoes

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, these

potatoes

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are cleaned in water after they are delivered to the producers.

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it is peeled one by one and cut into small pieces. After that, these small pieces of

potatoes

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are boiled and chilled for storage.

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,

salmon

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and other ingredients, fresh

salmon

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is delivered to manufacturers.

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, they are mixed with lemon juice and salt.

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the mixtures are grilled in steam ovens. After that,

skins

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the skins

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and bones of

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salmon

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the salmon

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are removed. After being inspected, peas and sauce are added to

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salmon

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the salmon

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, and the

last

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ones are added

being

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stored

potatoes

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. In the next step, the mixtures of peas, sauce,

salmon

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, and

potatoes

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are wrapped

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and

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freezes

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.

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, they are stored or dispatched to stores or sellers.