The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies
This
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illustrate
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the ingredients of frozen fish pies
,
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apply
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and the various steps in
its
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their
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production.
Overall
, there
four
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main products to manufacture fish pies, specifically
salmon
,
potatoes
, peas, and sauce.
In addition
,
while
potatoes
can be used for up to a month,
salmon
should be used within 12 hours or less. In terms of
potatoes
, these
potatoes
are cleaned in water after they are delivered to the producers.
Then
it is peeled one by one and cut into small pieces. After that, these small pieces of
potatoes
are boiled and chilled for storage.
Then
,
salmon
and other ingredients, fresh
salmon
is delivered to manufacturers.
Then
, they are mixed with lemon juice and salt.
Next,
the mixtures are grilled in steam ovens. After that,
skins
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and bones of
salmon
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the salmon
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are removed. After being inspected, peas and sauce are added to
salmon
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the salmon
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, and the
last
ones are added
being
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stored
potatoes
. In the next step, the mixtures of peas, sauce,
salmon
, and
potatoes
are wrapped
,
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and
then
freezes
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.
Finally
, they are stored or dispatched to stores or sellers.
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