The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart
illustrate
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the
propotion
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proportion
promotion
of social
media
consumers by
age
in Jamestown in 2018.
Overall
, 13-25 and 26-35
years
old groups
possesse
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possess
possessed
a larger
propotion
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proportion
of social
media
consumers.
In addition
, 36-
45
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45-year-old
years
old people utilise SNS followed as the third largest
group
.
On the other hand
,
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-55 and over 55
age
groups have a smaller
propotion
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proportion
of social
media
users. Turning the
tha
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the
data
in
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more detail,
13
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the 13
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-25 and 26-35
age
group
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have the largest social
media
usage, and those
group
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have a 5% of deviation, with specific percentages being 40% and 35%, respectively.
In contrast
, over 55
years
old people rarely use SNS and have
a
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smallest proportion at 2%.
Moreover
, 36-45
years
old SNS users occupy
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a three-twentys
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three-twentys
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three-twenty
three-twenties
percentage.
In addition
,
46
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-55
age
group
undergo 8% of percentages. Interestingly, the combination percentages of those two groups
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one-ten
propotion
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proportion
promotion
.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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