The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give demographic information about marital status in
both
Australia and Canada.
It is immediately noticeable that the vast majority of people
in both
countries are technically married. However
, in Canada
the majority of these marriages have ended but the Add a comma
Canada,
people
have not been divorced with 53% of the population being separated from their spouse. This
is compared to only 41% in Australia where there is a significantly higher proportion of people
still in their marriage.
With regard to the other figures
they are relatively similar for Add a comma
figures,
both
countries with slightly more Canadians never having been married or having lost their spouse and slightly more Australians being divorced. However
another striking fact is that there Add a comma
However,
are
three Change the verb form
is
percent
of Canadians Change the spelling
per cent
living
in a Wrong verb form
live
same sex
marriage but there are no Australians in Add a hyphen
same-sex
same sex
marriage recorded.
Add a hyphen
same-sex
Overall
, we can see that the majority of people
are either married or separated but not yet divorced in both
countries. However
, Canadians were more likely to have ended their relationships.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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