The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features,andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amounts of energy in the USA from 1980 to 2012, and predictions
to
2030. Change preposition
for
Overall
Petrol
and Oil
were consistently keeping a
upward trend as the dominant fuel in Change the article
an
32-year
period.Add an article
a 32-year
the 32-year
Besides
their consumption is expected to continue increase
, reaching 50 quadrillion units.
In 1980, the consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower almost had the same quantity (less than 5q), stood at the Fix the infinitive
to increase
last
levels of the
energy. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
the amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
petrol
and oil
in the USA was 35q, ranking the first place. Coal and natural gas stayed at
Change preposition
in
middle
with 20p and 16p respectively.
Over a period of 32 years, until 2012, Add an article
the middle
expected
hydropower experienced a slight decrease, the other energy consumption Correct article usage
the expected
were
all had Unnecessary verb
apply
a
upward trend. Change the article
an
Petrol
and oil
reached 40q, coal and natural gas were both around 23q.
As for projections, the amounts of natural gas and hydropower will remain stable, but coal and
Correct word choice
apply
petrol
and oil
will continue
have Add the particle
continue to
significant
rise to 30q and 50q respectively. A slightly upward trend will be seen in the nuclear and solar/wind from 2025 to 2030.Correct article usage
a significant
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, oil, q with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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