the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The plans illustrate the degree to which Central
Library
has changed over 2 decades.
Overall
, the
library
has experienced substantial changes, the most prominent of which are the introduction of dedicated spaces for events, self-service facilities, and a cafe.
Additionally
, the
library
now has an open space in the
center
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. Twenty years ago, as one entered the
library
, to the left lay a reading
room
offering access to newspapers and magazines, but it has been now replaced by a computer
room
. To the right, there was an enquiry desk where customers could buy tickets, return borrowed
books
and so on;
however
, it has been transformed into a cafe. Meanwhile, adult fiction
books
have been relocated to the right-hand side of the
room
, making way for all reference
books
on the left. Below the former book section is a small information desk
that is
equipped with three self-service machines, overtaking the space previously occupied by adult non-fiction
books
. In the middle of the
library
, tables and chairs have been completely removed. The back section of the
library
has
also
seen significant alterations, with the
room
in the left-hand corner that accommodated CDs, videos and computer games being enlarged to house fiction
books
for children and two sofas, and it
also
serves as a space for hosting storytelling events.
Finally
, there is a lecture
room
in the back right-hand corner where children’s
books
used to be.
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