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the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The plans illustrate the degree to which Central
Library
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 has changed over 2 decades.
Overall
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, the
library
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 has experienced substantial changes, the most prominent of which are the introduction of dedicated spaces for events, self-service facilities, and a cafe.
Additionally
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, the
library
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 now has an open space in the
center
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centre
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. Twenty years ago, as one entered the
library
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, to the left lay a reading
room
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 offering access to newspapers and magazines, but it has been now replaced by a computer
room
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. To the right, there was an enquiry desk where customers could buy tickets, return borrowed
books
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 and so on;
however
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, it has been transformed into a cafe. Meanwhile, adult fiction
books
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 have been relocated to the right-hand side of the
room
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, making way for all reference
books
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 on the left. Below the former book section is a small information desk
that is
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 equipped with three self-service machines, overtaking the space previously occupied by adult non-fiction
books
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. In the middle of the
library
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, tables and chairs have been completely removed. The back section of the
library
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 has
also
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 seen significant alterations, with the
room
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 in the left-hand corner that accommodated CDs, videos and computer games being enlarged to house fiction
books
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 for children and two sofas, and it
also
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 serves as a space for hosting storytelling events.
Finally
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, there is a lecture
room
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 in the back right-hand corner where children’s
books
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 used to be.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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