The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts
shows
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show
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how much money is spent on
health
care across Europe and how
this
spending has changed in the
last
ten
years
.
Overall
we can see that there was very little difference in
ten
years
in the
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
of
GDP
spent on
health
but there was a lot of difference in the
percent
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per cent
show examples
spending on
health
in different
countries
. Spending for all
three
years
was exactly
same
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the same
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in four of the
countries
with
three
countries
spending one
percent
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per cent
show examples
more of
GDP
on
health
over
ten
years
and four
countries
spend
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spending
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one
percent
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per cent
show examples
less.
In contrast
to
this
,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
show examples
was the only country where there was a bigger change and spent one
percent
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per cent
show examples
less
GDP
every year in the chart. It is
also
interesting that Belgium Denmark France Norway and Switzerland had
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
show examples
percentage
spending
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of spending
show examples
on
health
of their
GDP
with it
was
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being
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around
ten
percent
. Switzerland was the highest at 11
percent
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per cent
show examples
in all
three
years
.
This
was
considerable
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considerably
show examples
more than Estonia at only 3% in all
three
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words health, ten, years, percent, gdp, countries, three with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • expenditure
  • percentage
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • comparison
  • notable
  • pattern
  • exceptional
  • deviation
  • neighbouring countries
  • economic policies
  • public health
  • data analysis
  • statistical comparison
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