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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided pie charts
compares
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 the
portion
 of produced
electricity
 from different types of fountainheads and
renewables
 in Germany and
France
 in the year 2009.
Overall
, the highest
portion
 of the
source
 which
electrecity
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electricity
 was generated by belonged to conventional thermal in Germany and was nuclear in
France
,
also
, used
renewables
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renewable
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sources
 for
electricity
 generation in Germany was more than in
France
. It is clear from the illustrations
about
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that about
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 60 per
cent
 of
electricity
 energy was generated by conventional thermal and just below a quarter of that was produced by nuclear
source
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sources
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. the proportion of
renewables
that
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apply
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utilized to produce
electricity
 energy was 17.4 per
cent
that
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and
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 the highest
portion
 of that belonged to biomass and wind
sources
by
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39.3 and 36.9 per
cent
, respectively. About 17 per
cent
 of
renewables
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renewable
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sources
was
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were
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 hydroelectric to produce
electricity
 and the proportion of solar
source
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sources
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 was negligible. In
France
, nuclear was the main
source
 to generate
electricity
by
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76 per
cent
 and
used
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apply
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conventional thermal
source
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sources
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 was
minor
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a minor
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fractio
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fraction
.
Renewables
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Renewable
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sources
 that
used
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were used
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 for generating
electricity
was
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were
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 13.7 per
cent
.
The
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A
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 significant
portion
 of that belonged to hydroelectric
by
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about 80 per
cent
. Other renewable
sources
was
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were
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 negligible in
comarison
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comparison
 with hydroelectric
source
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sources
show examples
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words portion, electricity, renewables, france, source, sources, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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