The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
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The line graph provides information about the total number of people in Japan in terms of age group commencing in 1960 and how it is been estimated in 2040.
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, it can be seen that the percentages of 15 to 65 decreased
however
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it is expected to rise
at the end
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of 2024.
While
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the population of children increased
at the end
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of the period, senior citizens surpassed and it is been
forcasted
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forecasted
to increase in 2024. the population of children in 1960 stood at 30 per cent.
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figure increased to about 35% in 1970 before it started fluctuating to about 15% in 2010. the total number remained stable and it is been projected to be the same by 2024. The total number of people of 15 to 64 was around 65% in 1960. The figure decreased to about 60% ,
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, it is expected to rise to about 62% in 2040.
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