The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Instructions to follow • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task • Write atleast 150 words

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given

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map provides the development of

village

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the village

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of Rye

mouth

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Mouth

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. The tow maps provide the

diffrence

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difference

between

year

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the year

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1995 till nowadays.

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, the newest

virsion

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version

of the village is

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better than

old

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the old

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version.

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According

to the graph, it is noticeable that there is a development in

construction

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the construction

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sector. It can clearly

seen

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that there is a lot of changes

has

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been on. the village by the years. As

showen

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shown

the forest park has been changed to be 2 tennis

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, on the north of

tennis

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the tennis

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yeard become a golf area.

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, the fish market was demolished and

replace

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apartments. In

addtion

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addition

, the number of houses has

increasd

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increased

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the maps it is remarkable that the

number of

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population has increased since 1995.

Rfrance

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to the two maps there is a big and significant effort in

construction

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sector.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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145 words

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