The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The provided line chart illustrates the
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outlays on books in four different countries in Europe in the decade from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, what stands out is that the
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statistic outnumbered the others by a significant margin
while
the rest of the countries finished the interval in a near place relatively.
To begin
, a slight swing was seen in the
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line throughout the period
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ranging between 80 to almost 95 million dollars. at
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first,
the number escalated gradually until 1999 when it diminished moderately.
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, the outlays on books numbers rose and hit a peak
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well above 90 in 2005. In terms of the others, the trajectory of France was more consistent over the interval
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starting
at approximately 55 million dollars and
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around 75
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.
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, Italy's
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increased and reached an identical level
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France
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in 1997 before it dipped and
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continued
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its growth after it to the end where it was just over
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line.
Moreover
, in around 2002, Italy's rate was overcome by Austria which was having a massive resurgence over the period, apart from remaining stable between 1999 and 2001.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • surge
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • steady
  • comparison
  • significant change
  • spending patterns
  • economic conditions
  • cultural factors
  • cross-country comparison
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