The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph shows the statistics of closed
shops
and new Use synonyms
shops
in a certain country from 2011 to 2018.
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Overall
, the number of new Linking Words
shops
reached the highest point in 2011 at 8,500 Use synonyms
shops
, meanwhile, the figure of closed Use synonyms
shops
was at the bottom position in 2015 at 500 Use synonyms
shops
.
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To begin
with, the number of new Linking Words
shops
fluctuated during the given period. Use synonyms
In addition
, it significantly dropped from 8,500 Linking Words
shops
in 2011 to 4,000 Use synonyms
shops
in 2012, and Use synonyms
then
it rose to 6,000 Linking Words
shops
in 2014. After that, it decreased to 4,000 Use synonyms
shops
in 2015 and remained stable until 2017. Use synonyms
Finally
, it slightly declined to 3,000 Linking Words
shops
in 2018. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the figure for closed Linking Words
shops
dramatically went down from 6,500 Use synonyms
shops
in 2014 to 500 Use synonyms
shops
in 2015. Use synonyms
However
, it rapidly got back to the normal level of 5,000 Linking Words
shops
in 2016. Later, it remained constant until 2018.Use synonyms
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