the chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

Depicted in the line chart

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the percentage of

peoples’

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enthusiasm for particular

sports

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based on a survey from 1995 to 2005 in six

sports

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namely;

foot

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, swim, rugby, snooker, tennis, and

golf

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. In general, it can be clearly observed that the most common people choose

foot

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sports

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. Meanwhile, the

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percentage was recorded in

golf

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. On the one hand, there experienced an upward trend in the level of people choosing

foot

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,

swim

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, and rugby during the

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periods shown.

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, starting at 42% In 1995, the level of

foot

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rose slightly to 3% more in the

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years. Swim and Rugby had a similar trend, which reached 27%.

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, swimming reached a peak of almost 30% in 2000.

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, snooker, tennis and

golf

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had a downward trend during the same time period.

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the beginning of the year, around less than 30% of snooker’s and tennis proportions declined

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to around 23% by the end of the period. Meanwhile,

golf

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only decreased by around 3% from 18% in 1995.