the chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

the chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.
Depicted in the line chart
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the percentage of
peoples’
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people’s
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enthusiasm for particular
sports
based on a survey from 1995 to 2005 in six
sports
namely;
foot
, swim, rugby, snooker, tennis, and
golf
. In general, it can be clearly observed that the most common people choose
foot
sports
. Meanwhile, the
least
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percentage was recorded in
golf
. On the one hand, there experienced an upward trend in the level of people choosing
foot
,
swim
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, and rugby during the
throughout
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periods shown.
For example
, starting at 42% In 1995, the level of
foot
sports
rose slightly to 3% more in the
last
years. Swim and Rugby had a similar trend, which reached 27%.
However
, swimming reached a peak of almost 30% in 2000.
On the other hand
, snooker, tennis and
golf
had a downward trend during the same time period.
In
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the beginning of the year, around less than 30% of snooker’s and tennis proportions declined
dramtically
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dramatically
to around 23% by the end of the period. Meanwhile,
golf
only decreased by around 3% from 18% in 1995.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, foot, golf with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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