Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly around the world. What are the reasons for this? Suggest some solutions.

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In recent years, the
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among adolescents and young adults
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increasing at an alarming
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in many parts of the world. In
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I am going to discuss the reasons and
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suggest some solutions to
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, the
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numbers
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of
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a teenager
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who are breaking the law
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increasing
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many factors.
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some research, children who grow up
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low-income families or
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in highly
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crime
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part of the
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of
youth
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crimes.
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, not
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all
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students can get a proper education to acknowledge that if their actions are right or not.
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, because of the physiological changes in adolescents and young adults
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their behavior
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harder to understand.
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, parents can't actually understand what their children are thinking or trying to do, they can talk back to their parents and do more
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things.
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, one
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most common causes of
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crime
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increasing
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is from other individuals in
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society
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, there are hundreds
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of type
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of people who could exist in our
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, and they are willing to ask you to do illegal things for their own good.
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there are still plenty of ways to solve the issue. First of all, the governments should put these young offenders into juvenile detention
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to educate them back from the start.
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rules should be added and used against teenagers
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are trying to break the law or doing illegal things like dealing drugs or robbing. Another way is
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society
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should raise
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awareness against the problem that the
youth
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crime
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rate
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is
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extremely fast.
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but not least, schools should add more lessons to talk about crimes and how to avoid breaking the law as much as possible.
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, it is not that all of these ways could stop the
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of
youth
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crimes completely, but it is still helping us a little
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reducing the
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of
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nowadays. In conclusion, the
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and the governments are still trying their best to stop the
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rate
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as soon as possible,

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