You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The pie chart depicts Germany and France's electricity generation from all types and renewable during a specific period .It is clear from the graph that the conventional thermal had the largest value in Germany
while
the hydroelectric source ranked the highest ratio in France . According to
what is shown, in Germany conventional thermal accounted for the half of quarter about 59.6 and nuclear was at 23% also
,the renewable source represented 17.4 .However
, biomass from renewable sources had the most significant ratio which was 39.3 and wind and hydrolysis were at 17 and 36 in the same order while
solar had the least around 6.1
On the other hand
, in France region nuclear covered the largest percentage about 76 %Correct word choice
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, the conventional thermal had the lowest ratio 10.3 Afterward biomass solar experienced the lowest estimatedSubmitted by aldossaryfaten95 on
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