The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people in six different age groups who visited museums in five-year intervals from 2006 to 2016.
Overall
, it is clear that
museums are mostly interesting to people who are between 55-64 years old. However
, in the last
year of record, the 35-44 group
is engaged by this
kind of facility.
To begin
with, the percentage of individuals who were in the 15-24 group
occupied 25% in 2006 and it slightly escalated by 1% before dropping back to 25% again in the next ten years. The 25-34 group
started at roughly 27% in the first year as well as
it continuously increased to approximately 24% throughout the period. Furthermore
, A noticeable rise was seen in the group
of 35-44 people, which was at 20% in 2006, and then
arrived at 38% in 2016.
Additionally
, The fraction of the 45-54 population began at the same number as the 35-44 but it jumpped
to 30% and hovered at Correct your spelling
jumped
this
number through the end. The 55-64 which reached the highest point in the statistic, at 40%, plummeted to 30% in the final year. Lastly
, the fluctuation was seen in the elderly group
which was well over 20 in 2006 and ended at nearly 23%.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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