The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The illustrated pie charts provide data about the usual amount of
food
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, consumed in the world in 2008 with comparison to China and India. The pie charts are divided into 4
food
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groups: processed
food
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, vegetables and fruits, animal
food
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, and nuts and seeds. As it might be concluded from the charts, the main
food
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type eaten by humanity in 2008 was processed
food
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.
Nevertheless
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, it has to be mentioned that vegetables and fruits were
also
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widely consumed.
According to
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the chart, the least
food
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that was not so
demanded
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were nuts and seeds. As it might be concluded from the chart, the world's tendency of
food
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consumption coincides with China's and India's
ones
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apply
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.
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, the whole
humanity
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of humanity
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absorbed 41% of processed
food
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out of all
food
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possible
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types and in both Asian states processed
food
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maintains leadership (41% in China and 39% in India).
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • average consumption
  • worldwide
  • data
  • comparison
  • differences
  • similarities
  • food items
  • categories
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • majority
  • minority
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