The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The illustrated pie charts provide data about the usual amount of
food
, consumed in the world in 2008 with comparison to China and India. The pie charts are divided into 4 food
groups: processed food
, vegetables and fruits, animal food
, and nuts and seeds.
As it might be concluded from the charts, the main food
type eaten by humanity in 2008 was processed food
. Nevertheless
, it has to be mentioned that vegetables and fruits were also
widely consumed. According to
the chart, the least food
that was not so demanded
were nuts and seeds.
As it might be concluded from the chart, the world's tendency of Replace the word
demand
food
consumption coincides with China's and India's ones
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, the whole humanity
absorbed 41% of processed Change preposition
of humanity
food
out of all food
possible food
types and in both Asian states processed food
maintains leadership (41% in China and 39% in India).Submitted by katerina21.05 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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