The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph depicts data on the amount of money that was spent on books
among
four European countries over the course of ten years.
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, between 1995 and 2005, a rising trend can be seen between four
countries. Germany took Correct article usage
the four
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lead, reaching Correct article usage
the
highest
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the highest
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France
and next
Italy are not far behind. Correct word choice
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However
, Austria experienced a sighificant
climb, attaining nearly the Correct your spelling
significant
France
level.
To begin
with, in 1995, Germany started at 80 millions
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grow
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grew
then
it skyrocketed, accumulating just above 70 by 2005.
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Italy
France
started at nearly the same level, Italy at 50 and France
at about 55. Over the years the sellings gradually grew, where
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France
surpassed the
Italy, reaching roughly 72 Correct article usage
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millions
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while
Italy accomplished just over 60.Submitted by katenok200312 on
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