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the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported four different countries in tonnes.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported four different countries in tonnes.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart
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 information about
summarized
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the summarized
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 amount of goods that have been imported .
Overall
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, the data will be calculated by reaching
such
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 goods as
tea
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 and
coffee
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 in tonnes by
Canada
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,
UK
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,
USA
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 and
Germany
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 .The highest point of
tea
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 importing
belong
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 to
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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,
while
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 the top of
coffee
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 to
Germany
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. It can be seen
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while
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that
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 in
Canada
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 and
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Germany
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Germany,
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 there was an advantage in Favor of
coffee
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, in
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and
USA
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 the sign turning to
tea
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.
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 with,
amount
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the amount
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 of
tea
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 in
UK
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 the was equal to 160000,
while
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 in
Canada
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 it was just over 20000,
that is
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 the lowest point.The second
from
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 the list was
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USA
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the USA
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 with just over 100000.In
Germany
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 the poor decrease until 40000. There
was
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were
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 similar results in
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USA
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the USA
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 in
Canada
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 that was 40000.
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, in
the
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apply
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Germany
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 it was just under 40000.There was the tiniest number of
the
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apply
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coffee
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 importing in
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UK
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the UK
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 that was equal to 20000
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, uk, usa, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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