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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the prediction for the total percentage of growth in towns and cities prevalent in many parts of the
world
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Overall
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, it can be seen that
Latin
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America
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 always keeps the highest level though each period includes 1950, 2000, and 2030 at the top of trends.
Firstly
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, Africa and Asia had approximately 11% and 13% in 1950. Next to
Latin
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America
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 and the whole
world
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 with the stats nearly 42% and 30%.
Secondly
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, Africa and Asia have seen an increase almost the same with 38%.
However
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,
Latin
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America
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 and the whole
world
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 have risen significantly to 48% and 70% in 2000.
Finally
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, the prediction for the increase in
Latin
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America
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 will reach the highest point at 80%.
Otherwise
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, the whole
world
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 will hit the trend close
together with
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 Africa and Asia including 60%,52%, and 57%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, latin, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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