The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of three types of nutrients in four types of meals that might be harmful
for
health if consumed in excess Change the preposition
to
amount
. Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
In addition
, the data is collected for the USA and is stated in percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, it is noticeable that sodium
and saturated fat consumption in dinner are
the highest when Wrong verb form
was
breakfast
was the lowest. Day meal stayed in the middle among the four but snacks
only placed first in one category.
To begin
with, the amount of sodium
in the
dinner stands out Correct article usage
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with
43%, significantly more than lunch which is only 29%. Change preposition
at
Subsequently
, breakfast
and snacks
had the lowest quantity of sodium
relatively with 14% each. In terms of saturated fat containment, it has the same trend as sodium
which
dinner Correct your spelling
with
is
in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
first place and lunch Correct article usage
apply
comes
Wrong verb form
coming
the
second. Correct article usage
apply
Whereas
, fat seems to be main
ingredient in Change the article
the main
snacks
more than in breakfast
, with 21% and 16% respectively.
Moving to the added sugar
in meals, snacks
are the key component, accounting with
42%. Super has almost the half amount of Change preposition
for
sugar
in snacks
. Moreover
, the ratio of sugar
in the
Correct article usage
apply
breakfast
is equal to the fat, at 16%, and lunch contains sugar
at 19%.Submitted by laishweyee91 on
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