The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates the differences between the current Southwest

airport

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Airport

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and its future image after the reconstruction

will be

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made.

Overall

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,there will be major improvements in the number of gates and the facilities around them.

Similarly

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,the walkway will be replaced with a sky train.

In addition

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,in the upcoming year,there will be more access to amenities

such

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as shops

nearby

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near

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the gates,

as well as

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three new additions to the

departure

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sections:an ATM,a car hire,and a cafe.

Howewer

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However

,there are

not

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significant changes in

the

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apply

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passport control,security and customs in the airport. Currently,the airport is composed of 8 gates with a walkway nearby.

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,there are only two exits,one in the departures and the other one in the arrivals.

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,there are no additional customer services in the arrivals section.

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Also

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check in

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check-in

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and a cafe are available in the

departure

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section.

On the other hand

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,a significant growth in gate number will be seen in the

post development

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post-development

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state.

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,they will surround the sky train which is in the

center

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centre

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.The

departure

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and arrival exits are composed

with

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2 doors per

each

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apply

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side.

Also

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, the arrival area will be filled with cafes,an ATM, and a car hire.

Lastly

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,a bag drop will be placed into the

departure

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platform.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure there are spaces after commas and periods (e.g., 'Overall,there...' should be 'Overall, there...').

task achievement

While the overview is clear, adding a concluding sentence summarizing the overall changes would provide a more complete picture.

task achievement

The essay includes a clear comparison between the current airport and the future redevelopment, providing a comprehensive response to the task.

coherence cohesion

The essay structure is logical, and main points are well-supported.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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11
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many people believe,humen health standards is going to fail in the future.Do you agree or disagree this statement.

Online shopping has become more popular than before.discuss causes and effects of this trend.

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?