The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The supplied bar charts indicate the
amount
of sale
in online websites in various parts Fix the agreement mistake
sales
in
New Change preposition
of
Zealand
over a decade.
It can be clearly seen that people prefered
to spend their money on online Correct your spelling
preferred
shops
for travel
much more than some other retails
in 2003.Replace the word
retailers
However
,in 2013 the average of money which was spent in web shops
for film and music was the highest amount
in New Zealand
.
In 2003,people paid their income in digital markets for travel
and clothes,respectively 36% and 24% in New Zealand
.(Which travel
was the highest average over the whole year).Interestingly a third percentage of sale
for online Fix the agreement mistake
sales
shops
was film and music in New Zealand
in 2013.After which
,Correct pronoun usage
this
this
amount
was 29% for travel
in 2013.
In contrast
,the proportion of sale
of digital Fix the agreement mistake
sales
shops
for film and music was slightly more than books with 21% and 19% in New Zealand
in 2003.Moreover
,in 2013,nearly a quarter of sales in online stores was
for books in New Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Zealand
.Following
this
a tiny fraction of Add a comma
this,
sale
in internet markets was for clothes roughly 16% in New Fix the agreement mistake
sales
Zealand
in 2013 and was the lowest amount
over the period.Submitted by TUTOO on
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