ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs illustrate the number of
people
subscribe
to cell Correct pronoun usage
who subscribe
phone
lines and landlines in four countries
, Eritrea, India
, the UK
and Uruguay, from 2005 to 2015. Overall
, we can see that in all countries
, landline subscriptions had a stable trend, whereas
the trend of mobile phone
subscriptions was upward over the ten year
period. Interestingly, Add a hyphen
ten-year
people
from more developed countries
, namely the UK
and India
, had higher subscription rate
to Fix the agreement mistake
rates
moblie
and fixed telephone lines.
Correct your spelling
mobile
There
appears that there were more Correct pronoun usage
It
people
using mobile phone
and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
landline
in wealthier Fix the agreement mistake
landlines
countries
. The UK
and India
always had higher subscription rate
than Eritrea and Uruguay to both Fix the agreement mistake
rates
moblie
Correct your spelling
mobile
phone
and fixed telephone lines over the period.
It is interesting to note that in 2005, British had the most Fix the agreement mistake
phones
people
subscribed to both mobile phone
and landlines, at 10000 and 6000 respectively which Fix the agreement mistake
phones
were
doubled the figure of the second largest subscription, Unnecessary verb
apply
India
. However
, even more and more people
subscribe
to mobile Wrong verb form
subscribed
phone
in the Fix the agreement mistake
phones
UK
afterward, India
surpassed that in 2009 and had been superior to that
Correct determiner usage
the
in
Change preposition
apply
UK
by 2015 by 5%.Submitted by puimei822 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, phone, countries, india, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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