The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the extent to which Lynwich College has changed over the past two decades to become more
convenience
and accessible. Replace the word
convenient
Overall
, we can see that the layout of Linking Words
school
has changed and there has been a lot of renovation.
Correct article usage
the school
Firstly
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
transport
system has changed dramatically. Lynwich College was only accessible Correct article usage
the transport
with
car in the past. Students, now, can commute to campus by bus or bike since a bus stop and a bike Change preposition
by
storge
Correct your spelling
storage
has
been built.
Another noticeable change is the introduction of different facilities. A cafeteria has been built in the focal point Correct subject-verb agreement
have
where
is easily accessible; Correct word choice
which
therefore
, solving students’ dining problem. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the size of Linking Words
sports
field was shrunk and the library has been relocated to the south side of college building 2, in order to construct a sports Correct article usage
the sports
center
. Change the spelling
centre
As a result
, students have more sports options.Linking Words
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