The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the data about males' and
females
' regular physical activity in different age groups from Australia in 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
, at the beginning out of the young,
females
had a low result, meanwhile, men showed one of the best results.
However
,
then
from the other age category
females
had increased their finals than boys.
Nevertheless
, the oldest category demonstrated an equal result.
Firstly
, in the company from 15 to 24, males depicted 52,8%, in the meantime,
females
had only 47,7%.
Nonetheless
, from the troop aged 25-34,
females
had a higher score of 48,9% and men lower than them by 42,2%. In the next crowd 35-44, males had a significant fall,
while
females
had a rise to 52,5%.
Secondly
, again in the next group, everything remained in an unchanged position, as
females
had more individuals who did exercises. In the oldest group, the two categories had the same result with each other.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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