The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates the data about males' and
females
' regular physical activity in different age groups from Australia in 2010.
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Overall
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it is clear that
, at the beginning out of the young, Linking Words
females
had a low result, meanwhile, men showed one of the best results. Use synonyms
However
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then
from the other age category Linking Words
females
had increased their finals than boys.Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the oldest category demonstrated an equal result.
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Firstly
, in the company from 15 to 24, males depicted 52,8%, in the meantime, Linking Words
females
had only 47,7%.
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Nonetheless
, from the troop aged 25-34, Linking Words
females
had a higher score of 48,9% and men lower than them by 42,2%. In the next crowd 35-44, males had a significant fall, Use synonyms
while
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females
had a rise to 52,5%.
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Secondly
, again in the next group, everything remained in an unchanged position, as Linking Words
females
had more individuals who did exercises. In the oldest group, the two categories had the same result with each other.Use synonyms
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