The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the results

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satisfied visitors were in Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment

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a year.

Overall

, the survey indicated that the crowds' responses seemed to be good since the number of dissatisfied people decreased

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were increasing gradually.

Firstly

, in the first year mentioned, despite the quantity of the folks satisfied shown, most visitors, about the percentage of 40, were dissatisfied owing to the internal appearance, which was not impressive, and another 10% very displeased,

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, approximately 5% of goers who did not respond to the poll.

On the contrary

, a year later, the

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museum

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renovated causing many good responses

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the visitors,

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of the

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who had been there were pleased about the refurbishment but those grumpy still existed,

nonetheless

, some were not willing to give any answers.